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Justice by Naith-SJ, literature

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Justice

Justice Kory’s parents had named him that in the hope that he’d become ‘a lawyer or summat like that,’ and make the family proud. Truth was, a fancy name didn’t guarantee a fancy school, and Justice’s upbringing held him back. Teachers used to say he was a bright kid, could go far, but in the small Georgia State town of Cayro, the farthest a man could go was manager of the convenience store. Cayro Convenience already had a manager, so Justice had to make do with delivery boy. It was Justice’s job to make sure the elderly folk of Cayro, and those who couldn’t walk too good, got their groceries on time e

The Storm by Naith-SJ, literature

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The Storm

We’d all read the story of the Englishman who’d been electrocuted in his swimming pool. We remarked on how sad it was and my grandmother warned us to stay out of the pool when the storms came. It was an empty warning to the rest of them – as soon as they heard the first clap of thunder they retreated inside to play Monopoly. I stayed outside I stood on the terrace and watched the storm sweep across the Tuscan hills. I watched the lightening hit the ground, imagining what traces it would leave behind. It got closer – flashes appeared in the valley below. I thought about the man in the pool again and the contrast of that in

T by Naith-SJ, literature

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T

a definition of my whole self that defies a definition. the means to make myself whole and truly me. the end where we belong although it feels tacked on. the beginning of so many who pushed and helped and hindered. the boy, in each of his hands the weapons of his own demise, and he who played so sweetly and made the whole world laugh. tall and scruffy, white and nerdy, late night talking deep. strange, two lines that mean so much in all this confusion. wonderful, that I should feel safe between two arms.

Mushroom Cloud by Naith-SJ, literature

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Mushroom Cloud

Finding humour in the smallest glance. Let go at the top and watch us fall. I don’t know if this is what I want But I’ll enjoy it while it lasts. Clouds are changing, looking back, Falling into a different view. Leaves and cigarettes, the most interesting. I’ll just stare, and touch and taste. Trees waving in an absent wind, I won’t look away, won’t miss a thing. The words distort the higher I fly. It’s an infection I’m happy to catch Because all I see is a shadowed crowd, This is the trip to the Mushroom Cloud.

Writing Tutorial - The Basics by Naith-SJ, literature

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Writing Tutorial - The Basics

Nathan’s Writing Guide: Part I – The Basics There’s a hell of a lot of creative writing all over the internet, and frankly most of it is rubbish. If you want to rise above that and become one part of the minority of decent writers, then this guide is for you. Whether you’re into original fiction, fan fiction, poetry, non-fiction, whether you’re writing for fun, for the hope of getting published or any other reason, there are rules you need to follow (and once you know them, you know how to break them!). Part I of this guide is about the very basics of writing – grammar, spelling and punctuation. Don’t t

Perfect Scars -IV- ClosetSpace by Naith-SJ, literature

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Perfect Scars -IV- ClosetSpace

Welcome in, you can’t come out. Find your place at the back – You must only whisper, never shout. Hidden in a mind of doubt, Reasons to stay begin to stack, Welcome in, you can’t come out. With all the hatred that they spout, A vicious sermon should make you crack – You must only whisper, never shout. Because you might break what they vowed And raising hell, you have the knack. Welcome in, you can’t come out. So try to take another route But you’ll still end joining this pack – You must only whisper, never shout. Bullying friends, a violent lout, Intolerant church, all a fact. Welcome in,

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Famously In Love

The first thing was his voice He sang like an angel A beautiful angel of music That would come and free me. He unlocked my heart And opened it to something new I forgot who I was, who he was Everything seemed possible. Then the cd stopped playing I found myself standing all alone The room got cold and I shivered Then I pressed the “play” button. Music filled out my soul With words that made me cry Words that made my heart melt If only he was singing to me Then I met his eyes Eyes that told me everything Eyes that free me forever From the feeling of being unloved I’m falling, falling for you Interviews, arti

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Mar 28
United Kingdom
Deviant for 18 years
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Current Residence: Surrey, UK
Favourite genre of music: Rock, Emo, Punk, Grunge, Metal, Techno, Dance, Trance
Personal Quote: I'll make it to the moon if I have to crawl

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A calligraphy pen and a scuffed up-old notebook.

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Writing, Reading, Partying

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Naith-SJ

Jun 16, 2009

Back

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I'm back. I have a subscription.  I'm writing more.  I'm commenting and critiquing more. If you want me to comment or critque your work, just send me a link and I'll get right on it.  There are just a couple of rules: 1. No fanfiction. 2. Nothing too long. No 100 page epics. I'll happily comment on the first chapter of a longer piece and read on if I like it. 3. Poetry, fiction prose and playscripts only.  I'm rubbish at non-fiction and screenplays and wouldn't be able to give accurate feedback. 4. Please be respectful if I give negative feedback - I'll happily explain the reasons behind it and help you try to improve. 5. Read my guides

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Naith-SJ

Jun 3, 2008

June Lit Features

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I've been busily commenting on various people's work and I'm featuring some of the best I've read. Poetry: :thumb86645220: - The Boy Who Smoke Followed by azen-te :thumb86804662: - In Paris by bekkia :thumb76328151: - Famously In Love by IchBinInDerLiebe Prose: :thumb42497277: - At Most, A Soldier by MystiqueDeep This is a small selection, because they're the four pieces that really impressed me on reading.  If you want to be featured in July, keep sending me your work.  I read and comment everything I'm sent. Thanks!

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Naith-SJ

May 26, 2008

A public service announcement

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I've decided on my career path, finally.  I want to be a literary editor.  And now I want to get some practice in. If you have a piece of poetry or prose that you want some honest feedback on from someone who knows what they're talking about, get in contact with me.  I will be completely honest and will help you to make your work better.  If you're fed up of 'Omg so kawaii! ^__^' type comments and want some proper comments, send me a note or a comment with a link to your work and I'll get back to you with feedback and advice.  I will read and comment on EVERYTHING. I'm also going to do a monthly journal feature of the best work I'm sent. H